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concrete environment

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Audi TT

It's my first try with my flash on car photography

Comments and Critiques are welcome :)

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Image size
900x600px 396.55 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 450D
Shutter Speed
116/1 second
Aperture
F/22.0
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jul 31, 2009, 10:50:10 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I like this shot but a few thinks bug me about it. My eye is drawn towards the big pole on the right of the image. I think that maybe a little more cropping on the car would've fixed that.

Also, the car is a little lost in the shadows. I'm a big fan of seeing the details in cars. The grill, the headlights, the wheels etc., A little bit of post work and this all could be taken care of.

Other than the poles, the shot has a really nice composition. I love the brick wall in the background. I would love to shoot my car in this location!